Once again you are appealing to a popular publication that published one man's theory. Find a peer reviewed article to make your case since opinions published in the popular press are not always credible.
As to your poem it is entirely off topic and this is your last warning. Stay on the thread topic you started. This is not a theology forum. However, your poem is only your opinion since Christians are saved by grace through faith in Jesus Christ not by accepting or rejecting a young earth scenerio and as I posted earlier that is evidence in Scripture that Genesis 1:2ff is the account of a recreation. Scripture does not tell us when God created angels.
Job 38:4-7
4 "Where were you when I laid the foundation of the earth?
Tell Me, if you have understanding,
5 Who set its measurements, since you know?
Or who stretched the line on it?
6 "On what were its bases sunk?
Or who laid its cornerstone,
7 When the morning stars sang together,
And all the sons of God shouted for joy?
NAS
God laid the foundation of the earth in Genesis 1:1 and the angels (son's of God) shouted for joy. Also I don't think scientists are going to be concerned about theories when they come face-to-face with their creator.